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Post by MenelaosGkikas on Dec 17, 2019 21:36:17 GMT
Can you foreshadow the term that will cause problems in between Joel & Emily? Here's an excerpt of my book. I would say, a down-to-earth approach? Why so? You can be analytical: INT. COFFEE SHOP (10 MINUTES LATER) The people at the coffee shop talk and listen to bits of Ritchie Valens’ song, "Oh Donna". As soon as the music fades out, Joel and Emily start talking. JOEL Have you started making any university plans? EMILY I am thinking of Drama, English literature, but also of a down-to-earth approach: management. As soon as we start making applications, I'll know. What about you? JOEL I am thinking of becoming an actor. You know, drama is my field. Joel eats his last bite of cheesecake and calls the waitress, in order to pay. JOEL (CONT'D) By the way, are you coming to our dancing party? EMILY I would love to! Shall we go together? JOEL If you could just give me your number... Joel & Emily exchange numbers. The waitress comes with the bill. She gives it to them and they pay. Right afterwards, the waitress leaves. JOEL I'll call you on Saturday morning to plan for the night. I had an amazing time! EMILY Thank you, Joel. JOEL You're welcome! They stand up and leave the coffee shop. The Book is already available in iTunes and Amazon! Get a taste with this Amazon link: amzn.to/2kC2oS3
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